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Tuesday, April 4, 2017

My poem

In Te maunga we have been writing poems. I made a poem describing myself. I did well describe myself.  Next time i can describe myself more.






Vinnie is a Lamborghini zooming like Quicksilver

Vinnie is a Rugby Stadium cheering on the All Blacks

Vinnie is Rugby ball soaring over the goal post

Vinnie is hot dog getting sprayed by tomato sauce

Vinnie is the  All Black jersey, shorts, socks and boots

2 comments:

  1. Hi Vinnie my name is Liam.b from your class, and I think that was really cool, my favroute part was when you said you were a hot dog getting, sprad by tomato sauce.
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  2. Hi Vinnie, Its Tia, great job with your awesome metaphors, What did you mean by "Vinnie is a hot dog getting sprayed by tomato sauce?"
    Yours sincerely,
    Tia :) :) :)

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